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Recensione alla storia Una confidente per Aramis - 31/03/18, ore 19:17
Capitolo 1: Un' orfana da salvare
Hello, meramadia94, I've been following your story for a long time, and I've read all the chapters more than once, always hoping to find a new one to read^^ I thought I had already commented on your story, but I think I haven't, or I forgot... My apologies for writing in english, as I said also to other writers here, my italian is not so good as to comment in italian^^ So i write in english. I like this story very much as you decided to creat a new character and add it into our beloved anime, and especially, to add it to Aramis' life. This was an interesting idea, as like this Aramis had the chance to have «una confidente» but also «una amica preziosa» and doesn't feel so alone anymore (as a woman). And Lunette as a name is a good hommage to Renèe/Aramis, as it is one of the names given to her in anime translations. Plus, Aramis and the others gave Lunette a «military education», and she can defend herself using a sword, I really, reallu laughed a lot when Lunette goes off to fight and the men say it's too dangerous for her - when they already have another woman besides them for over 7 years, named Aramis^___^ I also liked very much how you reinserted Milady in the plot and the intrigue, and that in the end, she is in prison, as dangerous as ever before... introducing Nicolas was also a good idea, even if Aramis thinks a lot of François and her past... But she is happy for her friend Lunette that she could find love and that they are able to get married and have a child, a thing she couldn't do with François. Even if now new dangers are announced, it has been so long since you posted a chapter - can you pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease continue your story and post the next chapters? I'm truly curious to find out more about this secret letter, and especially the new villains who target Nicolas and his family - but I think also Aramis as she is close to them... What is going to happen to our friends? Is this new villain going to free Milady out of prison and carry out a vendetta together?? Is Nicolas mentor still alive? Posta in vitezza un nuovo capitolo, mi piaci molto leggere la tua storia!! Baci di degen-aramis ^___^ P.S. As an A&A-fan, I hope that you will perhaps focus on Aramis and Athos in a near future, and give them a «happy ending» as well in this story?

Recensione alla storia L'orrendo foco - 20/03/13, ore 04:42
Capitolo 34: L'ultimo tratto di strada insieme
And here it was, the «last part of the road» the four friends made together^^ And what an arrival at the lands of the «Comte» - Grimaud and the men are true guardians!! had't it been for Athos, they would have attacked the other three...^^ I truly could feel all along the chapter the rising tension of Athos, as he approached his lands... he then made everything for his friends to feel comfortable, Aramis included (a bath^^ that is a nice link with the anime, it was like this that Jean discovered Aamis was a woman, by eyesdropping at the door^^) And I also loved the moment when Aramis realised Athos wasn't coming to sleep, and she goes looking for him.. and she teases him with the same words he uses «I'll only sleep the absolute minimum...» - but YAY!!! he understood her message, and he came upstairs, to «her» room... and what a gentleman he is too...LOL... he washes himself all clean before joining her in the bed, and I could see his every move the same way as Aramis with her eyes closed^^ And then finally, they let themselves go, and that all night long... so much for sleeping...^^ Ok, Aramis fell asleep, but he couldn't... Again, he feels sooooooooooooooooooooooo guilty for all of this happening, for her scars, her suffering, and for not being able to just stay with her and get married and live a happy life... Ok, I have just one question about something I didn't understand in italian: what is «la torre della badessa»? Is it the remains of the convent that burned down many years ago, after Olivier met Anne and they married?? It's the place where he met Anne?? And why is Aramis so worried when she says she heard the servants say that the tower seems to be haunted??? And Athos reacts nervously - that's never happened before... And why the link to «3 anni fa» and «la maschera»?? Is she afraid that the Iron Mask isn't dead, and might be here too?? And Athos reacts nervously like this because he KNOWS that Milady is here, and preparing something?? And he's worried, because he saw Aramis didn't eat anything and had a trembling hand... But Porthos - I love Porthos!!! He simply says «Andremo a dare un’occhiata, domattina. Vero, Athos?”, fece risoluto Porthos, anche se non c’era neanche bisogno di dirlo, ed addentò una cotoletta di montone. » and then continues eating!!! Bravo, Porthos!!! Ok, this is long enough as a comment, thank you for reading it, and for answering to what you can^^ And please, update soon, this is truly becoming a climax, now that we know the «final battle» is about to begin... But surely you have some surprises for us!! Grazie, a presto^^

Recensione alla storia L'orrendo foco - 22/01/13, ore 06:18
Capitolo 33: Consiglio di guerra
Hello, gaiaton, i'm truly enjoying your story and the way you managed to make everything turn out, even if there was a lot of suffering for Aramis, that she needed a very long time to very slowly become herself again, she did it, with the precious help of her friends, especially Porthos!! And for some chapters, I really wanted to slap Athos for his behaviour...^^ But then his past was haunting him, he managed to put it aside and slowly reconcile with Aramis... until Milady destroyed this new emerging friendship (and love...) in the cabin... What a serpent, Milady... but Aramis managed to KO her, and she was arrested... but Aramis never wanted to see Athos again... she was so broken inside, and again she suffers... But again, thanks to madame de Monsorot, Porthos and Philippe, and "vino dolce" finally, at the ball, they reconcile! And then Rochefort comes... grrrrrr... bad timing...^^ And Athos decides to sacrifice everything for Aramis, the next day, testifying he's Anne's husband, and the Comte de la Fère, so she will definitely be hanged. But she escapes... again... and all he did was in vain... I liked this chapter 33 very much, it shows how the 4 friends are united and decide to go after Milady, this time with the permission to make justice... I liked the way that all went to Aramis' side, who is still afraid of flames and fire, and how they shared this night in the outside, and that Athos will sleep back to back with her - as now they are united again, as friends, but also with their hearts. So, let's see what will happen next...^^ I have some questions that I didn't understand about this chapter and the previous ones, so this will be a very long recension... and thank you for answering to me, if you can without revealing spoilers, of course^^ Here they are (I read the chapter more than once, but I still don't understand...): 1- Athos recovered the belongings of "le comte de la Fere" from Vesmul at the prison the day before the ball, or to days before the ball? And this was 3 days ago? And that same day, he went to see mastro Yakov giving him the ring and he got this antidote-immunisation liquid in return? But that day he didn’t know Anne-Milady had escaped yet… because this only happens 2 days ago, the morning after the ball, correct? And so, in this chapter, Athos has been drinking this antidote for the 3rd day, the night before they are leaving Paris? Because I only counted 2 days since the ball... that's why I don't understand… And also, when Rivka asks about his father, and that Mastro Yakov saved his father in the past, and if he was already married – does this mean that Milady had poisoned Athos’ father? And that is why mastro Yakov treated Athos’ father? 2- Aramis, Philippe, Porthos and d’Artagnan are waiting for Athos to arrive at Noisy-le-Sec, is that it? That is where he comes to join them the morning after Milady has escaped? 3- Final question: is it because he already took the first dosage of the immunisation-antidote that day, that Athos looks “pale, his shirt is undone, his hair is not in order, and he sweats when Aramis touches his face, even if it is cold”, when he arrives at the hill where Aramis is waiting for him? 4- Finally, more a request than a question: why does he think that they will be attacked with poison by Milady, if she is not expecting them to come looking for her there? And please, please, please… don’t make Aramis suffer the loss of Athos, now that she has found love again… she won’t survive that…^^ I want him to offer the jewels to his love Aramis… both alive… no sacrifice… (ok, I'm a total A&A romantic...^^) Grazie per la tua risposta possibile, et posta subito le prossimo capitulo^^ (et grazie di leggere la mia lunga recensione en inglese...)

Recensione alla storia Il ritorno della Maschera di Ferro - 03/03/12, ore 23:00
Capitolo 20: 20. Un'innamorato respinto
Ok, I've had three chapters to read in the meantime, and again, UAU, what a development!! Such a beautiful scene at the lake, between Aramis-Renee and d'Artagnan training with swords, then we have our great Porthos, speaking to Athos, saying he should stop hiding his feelings for Renee, as they're as clear as sunlight - he's in love!! And another UAU for the scene between Renee and Athos, at the bridge, and finally both show their feelings for one another, and their kiss was soooooo well described!! And of course Porthos and d'Artagnan can see the other two, and are happy for them... but Athos and also Renee end their kisses, and return to their two other friends. The further developments in chapter 19 were also so well put in scene, finally the medallion appears, and this time it is Athos who has the last word and sets the rules: a duel with the sword for the medallion, and if she wins she gets it back, but if he wins, he'll take all of her... now that's a hint towards what will happen later...LOL... And here's chapter 20, finally the ball at the Louvre, Renee did get a beatiful dress by Bonacieux, again Treville is stunned by her beauty, and at the Louvre, Athos can't take his eyes off her, and gets the highest reward he can get: a smile of Renee just for him alone!!! You did very well with Philippe, this answers my question about what he was planning, so he wanted to marry her, but was being selfish... I loved the small dialogue between Athos and Philippe, where Athos is barely able to control himself, and then Porthos has to come and offer him some "reasoning", remembering that Renee is ARAMIS, their comrade, and that she loves him, Athos, and no one else... You are giving us such a good friend in Porth, and that is worth a BRAVO!! The scene in the garden - very emotional for Philippe, and Renee who offers her friendship, being totally honest about loving another man right now, and then Athos and Porthos who totally misinterpret what they see... The next morning then, at the barracks, Athos who not even looks at Renee, and Porthos who for the first time uses an antipatic tone, but good for him that he immeiately says what they think they saw, and Renee understands why Athos reacted like this, while Porthos apologises... And I have to say you did well to "cut the moment" in the bed, again the medallion has acted as a barrier and made Athos stop, as long as Aramis isn't back in Renee's memories, he won't want to fully be with her; so nobly, he wants to give the medallion back to her, no need for the duel he proposed some nights ago... But Renee refuses, and says he should keep it as long as "Aramis" hasn't returned, plus to act as a protective good luck item for him. Is this a hint that this medalion is going to protect/save Athos, as it did with Aramis when she was struck by Manson on the cliff at Belle-Ile??? And now you say all is in place, and your villains can come to the charge - signora autora, vi prego aggiorna subito, io sto aspettando le "grand complotto de venganza" de Milady ed Alexander... A la prossima!!

Recensione alla storia Feuilleton 2 - Reloaded - 25/02/12, ore 00:48
Capitolo 2: Martedì
But of course you won't be arested... then many other girls from this form would have also to go with you, and the prison would be overbooked...LOL...LOL... My first comment on this story, you're really putting all the hidden feelings and desires into this prequel to the sequel, now these two can't stop making love to each other... They've waited for too long...LOL... but I see one problem: they have to "torture" themselves for five days longer...before Treville comes back... but if they continue like this, they won't be able to perform their tasks as soldiers during daytime in one day maximum...LOL...LOL...they'll be too tired because they "work" too much all night long... ;-) So, let's see how they can manage to keep their love/desire hidden for another five days... since this tuesday even one look from Aramis to Athos was enough to make something "alive" in his trousers...LOL...LOL...

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