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Long years
di LePoetrice

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Nuovo recensore
06/09/16, ore 21:28
Cap. 1:

Accipicchia, sono caduto in una trappola. Ho letto qualcosa in inglese. Maledizione! ...
Non fa niente, per questa volta faccio uno sforzo (me ne sto già pentendo).

In fact, this story is really sad. The fate wanted the protagonist, a young girl who just loved her father, to be... like she is for ever... because of he, and yet she still loves him. I think who could say that, when we see all the love that she has for the others, she is sanct. Let' s see if she join Mother Theresa in heaven.
We don' t know what happened to th father, but if that a good thing that he dies? I' m not really sure.

Here, it was everything I had to tell about this short story. If I made a error while I wrote in english, I don' t care.

Recensore Junior
24/04/15, ore 12:38
Cap. 1:

Oh, father, why is that story in english if you're italian?
Funny, but..... is he dead? YUPPIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OOOKKKKKKKKKKK I'm really stupid

byebye and make lord prosciutto be with you (probably you don't know what I'm talking about if you didn't play Mogeko Castle)

Moge-Ko<3

Nuovo recensore
14/01/15, ore 19:36
Cap. 1:

Hi! I'm so sorry to see that there aren't reviews, 'cause this flash-fiction deserves many, many reviews. I really enjoy it, even though is very short, it's also deep and well written. My advice is: publish this writ in other site, Efp is a beautiful community but the users are almost all italian. I hope the best for you and your fanfiction, See ya! Love_Music_29