Recensioni per
Feuilleton 2 - Reloaded
di floflo
Che peccato, è già finita pikkola??? |
Ma daiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.... |
Ma che carina anche questa storia..., pikkola! |
Santissimo cielo! |
Oh, pikkola! |
Ma Ma dico! |
E' brava FloFlo, ho molto gradito questo capitolo. Devo dire che mi hai molto stupita. Sei proprio ingamba sia a scrivere e che a trasformare la storia in bel romanzo rosa erotico! |
che mega figuradimm... |
Hello! here we are! ^ ____ ^, It's finally Friday, Athos and Aramis waiting is over, the captain returned, they hope to talk to him about their relationship, unfortunately the captain is not in a good mood, he has ordered that both rise to their office immediately, this is the message he gave to Porthos, notifies the giant Athos, but in a state of absolute concern, Athos tells her not to worry, to be on his last mission, in the office of Captain Athos and Aramis awaiting instructions from this, but the captain ignored until Athos speaking, at that time the captain hit the desk very excited, they had never seen or so, began to claim them about what happened between them in the barn, Athos try to talk but the captain is angry, said he was disappointed in them, was so outraged that almost call prostitute Aramis, Athos asked the captain respect to his future wife, Aramis first scared by the reaction of the captain, but seeing that the accused only as a woman, I try to speak, taking all the blame and the consequences to forgive Athos, the captain yelled to shut up, that he had a duty to report it, she said she accepted the punishment, in that said Athos time they understood and would leave immediately, took Athos to Aramis to leave the office when the captain asked again, he cursed a calm times and I ask them if they were going to marry, Athos said that if the captain more calm is said he would do nothing against him, but not to tell anyone and gave them his blessing, the Musketeers, thanked him, the captain told them to leave, that would damage later, when they left Aramis office was sad I had to leave the place he considered his home, plus even doubted that the captain did not report her, but wanted to hold Athos was not sure, just try and console her, told her that the captain would not do that, Aramis turned his hand to Athos, she is nervous they had to act normal as if nothing had happened, and at the end of the day would be his last day in the barracks as a musketeer, she did not know if I could to be as Athos gave value, they out into the yard and acted normal, in the courtyard was worried waiting Porthos, Athos told him to tell all the other day which was a promise of friends, the giant accept because I trusted him, when they had finished their shift together loving each other, confessing his love for six years, well I can tell, when they are in the barn and heard a horse was coming, was the captain, surprised at the time, he was enraged because they dishonored the barracks, I had imagined out of the Musketeers in such bad terms with the captain, but at the end of the day they were together, I hope it is only the end of this part, although I hope the wedding, this was a sad chapter, I hope to hear from you soon, thanks for sharing ^ _____ ^. |
Finale coerente con il resto della storia: Athos e Aramis coronano il loro sogno d'amore, ma debbono pagare il prezzo di lasciare i moschettieri; forte la scena del capitano De Treville arrabbiato; solo mi domando cosa abbiano raccontato a Porthos e D'Artagnan. |
conclusione perfetta per una storia perfetta. |
Ah ecco, perfetto. E una come cavolo fa a concentrarsi con quel bonazzo davanti? |
Hello! like this? ^ ____ ^, A beautiful chapter, it's Thursday it is almost to the weekend, but Aramis does not think about tomorrow, thinking of yesterday, more specific, the night before, when he thought all end, Athos gave a new beginning, finally proposed to her, Aramis could not stop thinking about her Athos, she was the happiest woman in the world, she was floating in the clouds, while Athos was in front of her, I reviewed the documents was in charge as second in command in the absence of captain, at one point instructed the Aramis, seeing that she was not paying attention to the call, Aramis react without understanding anything said yes, then she was very angry at the stables on the orders of Athos, she did not know to exist, when calm sat on the hay, then someone take it with arms and cover my mouth with his hand, then drag to the bottom of the barn where she saw that it was Athos, Aramis claim for the scare, but he said she did not pay attention to what he said, then began to love, Athos had duty that night, they could be together, it would be agony for both, when finished, Aramis, Athos was so tired helped her dress, when they heard someone coming Athos as a farewell kiss and left, the passion between them is becoming increasingly clear, can not be separated for a moment, what will happen on Friday?, the captain will come until Saturday?, as will make the decision of his two musketeers?, please update soon, thanks for sharing ^ ____ ^. |
La relazione segreta continua.. ma anche tra mille ostacoli non passano un attimo lontani! Solo, mi domando cosa succederà quando tornerà il capitano De Treville. |
che carini tanto dolci tanto innamorati... tanto arrapati come ricci! |