Ciao belgia of rome e un piacere risentirti...anche stavolta di errori ce ne sono un casino.
Dunque il gruppo e arrivato in una mini citta nell'astronave...minchia quanto e grande l'astronave :D .
e sfiga vuole che incontrino uno xenomorfo del film alien vs predator, che stranamente oltre ad avere la superrigenerazione e stato pure addomesticato AMMAZZA 0-0 .
pero non mi risulta che batman li abbia mai incontrati sai ?.
Per gli errori
"gratta-cieli" , si scrive senza il trattino in mezzo .
Poi...
"Come facciamo a condividerci eventuale donne trovate?!” , questo non e un errore ma mi ha fatto parecchio ridere Ahaha XD .
Poi
"qui il suolo era coperto di grandissimi trapeti"....non e TRAPETI ma TAPPETI .
poi
Poi quando lo xenomorfo e appena stato liberato soldato grida , "Che desiluziaaaaha!” , guarda non so che parola volessi usare ma non esiste nessuna parola italiana simile a questa .
Poi la tua descrizione dei combattimenti e abbastanza incasinata....
"il xenomorfo si libero e propulso il cavaliere oscuro nell’aria"
LO XENOMORFO SI LIBERO E SCAGLIO LONTANO IL CAVALIERE OSCURO .
" “Per la barba del vecchio Abraham Lincoln?! Cosa succede?!” panico Soldato alla vista di questa scena mentre aiutava Batman a rialzarsi"
Non dovevi scrivere "PANICO" , ma SBOTTO .
“I xenomorfi non hanno la capacita di fare crescere i loro membri mancanti" .
non dovevi scrivere i loro MEMBRI ,ma i loro ARTI.
" Demarrate il motore!” .
La parola DEMARRATE non esiste , dovevi scrivere ATTIVATE .
E poco piu sotto hai scritto "DEMARRO" , quando li dovevi scrivere SCATTÒ , e hai scritto la parola PROPULSO ,che si usa veramente poco nella lingua italiana e non nel tuo contesto....
Poi
"Sono diventato un infirme! La mia vita è ormai rovinata!”
Non e INFIRME , ma INFERMO ,e poi l'esploratore avrebbe usato un espressione piu rozza tipo , handicappato .
Poi
-“No, perché nascono da una sorta di cesariana forzata dall’interno dice Batman”
Non e CESARIANA FORZATA , ma PARTO CESARIO FORZATO , e non dovevi scrivere DICE ,Ma DISSE .
Poi
"Dice che un anatra bianca in costume blu da marinaio su un arcobaleno sta entrando nello hangar"
era una citazione a paperino ??? ^^ , carina .
Poi
L'espressione CHUUT , non esiste in italiano , per indicare di fare silenzio dovresti scrivere SHHHHH.
"James tento di dargli un colpo di cross con la sua pistola" , non dovevi scrivere "UN COLPO DI CROSS" , ma JAMES TENTO DI COLPIRLO CON IL CALCIO DELLA SUA PISTOLA" .
E ci sono vari altri piccoli errori.....
E dunque il gruppo ha incontrato 3 alieni....un tizio con la superrigenerazione ,una specie di donna robot/cyborg/androide , e un altro tizio , che dopo uno scontro niente male li hanno catturati tutti e 3 , ed ora sono ansioso di sapere come continua XD .
E senti ce un pg non molto sovrumano che al tuo gruppetto sarebbe utile , dalla pagina wiki inglese dedicata a lui ti ho copia/incollato il suo potere....il TRACE ON , se non sai l'inglese basta chiedere e ti dico che puo fare....ha un potere molto particolare .
Shirou is a magus trained by Kiritsugu Emiya. Differing from a formal magus, Shirou is a Spellcaster who does not follow the normal ways of magi and is thus considered a heretic. As he was adopted into the Emiya family, he has no way of inheriting Kiritsugu's Magic Crest, and lacks the innate talent produced through generations of magi striving to develop the best Magic Circuits. His training was informal and aside from sparse knowledge, his adoptive father Kiritsugu taught him little to nothing of magecraft out of fear that Shirō would end up like him, intentionally teaching him incorrectly in an attempt to scare his son away from magecraft. Unlike other Magi, Shirō is a warrior through and through, having trained his body by beating up entire gangs and practicing archery and swordsmanship.He is an unorthodox magus who uses a very specialized version of Gradation Air or Reinforcement and Projection, a form of magecraft that materializes objects, in accordance to the caster’s imagination, through the use of magical energy. Gradation comes from the fact that the created object slowly fades away after being created, and Air is an allusion to the fact that said object is made out of “nothing”. Reinforcement allows him to analyze the structural composition of an object, and increase its effectiveness, such as making it more durable or its shape more practical, or return it to its original state. He can also use it to improve his body's physical capabilities, such as his eyesight, allowing him to see as far as four kilometers away. Shirou is also very skilled in Structural Grasp Magecraft, which allows him to understand the structure and design of objects as if viewing a blueprint. Projection, while a high level skill, is considered useless compared toReinforcement due to the higher prana cost, and anything that Shirou initially projects is useless and hollow. Though the objects merely imitate the shape, there are only a few who can identify them as fakes in a first glance. Any practitioner that analyzes composition wouldn't be able to see through them, and even one that works through spiritual mediums would only notice a sense of incongruence.Shirou is later capable of using Tracing, a higher-level version of Projection that completely copies everything regarding the creation and existence of the object. During the Fate scenario, he slowly learns of it on his own by training with Rin and following Archer's advice: "If you can't defeat it, then imagine what can", while in the Unlimited Blade Works scenario, he learns of it through extensive contact with Archer. He is only effectively able to reproduce swords, other weapons, and armor, but this specialty allows him to faithfully reproduce even legendary weapons. He is capable of reproducing any sword that he has seen, though Noble Phantasms are always one rank below their original strength and armor costs three times the amount of prana, and he is capable of employing its entire history, allowing him to wield any weapon with the same proficiency of its original owner. He has to see the weapons as how their form as final product actually are with his own eyes to reproduce them, as even the blueprint of Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg is not enough to reproduce it, but by seeing it and Caliburn through shared memories of Justeaze Lizrich von Einzbern and Saber, he becomes able to fully trace them afterward. If the weapon is not made of materials that exist in the world, such as Ea, he cannot analyze or reproduce it, though he can tell its basic nature, prolonged exposure to weapons like Ea also damage his sanity, as his brain outright rejects the existence of weapons of its kind even as it tries to add it to his Reality Marble. He is also quite capable of creating his own original weapons, should he put his mind to it.Rather than simply creating his projections in the real world, he actually reproduces them within his Reality Marble, “Unlimited Blade Works” as if he were loading a gun, and then projects them into the real world as if he were firing it. This allows him to prepare dozens of swords at a time for later use. However, Shirou is unable to properly deploy or maintain Unlimited Blade Works due to a shortage of prana, but with a proper contract with a magus with a suitable level of prana, such as Rin, he is capable of using it. If he were to learn about it normally, unlike the situation in Unlimited Blade Works where he learns of it firsthand from Archer, it would take ten years of training to set the foundations for the ability and another ten years to reach to the point of being able to use it.[3] While actually using Unlimited Blade Works, the cost for creating the weapons is greatly diminished and the speed at which they can be created is also increased, allowing him to easily overwhelm and defeat Gilgamesh and his Gate of Babylon.Despite being trained more, he will never leave the level of a magus apprentice when it comes to his status as a general practitioner of magecraft. As a specialist magus, however, he would be received as someone on par with his foster-father’s evaluation as a "Magus Killer" with a rank of forty.[4] Shirou's basic training in Magecraft is extremely lacking, so he was left with the idea that he needs to create a new Magic Circuit with each use of Magecraft. He goes through extremely dangerous training, where he constantly faces the risk of death in order to develop a new Circuit. Though his body has twenty-seven high quality natural Magic Circuits, they had been abandoned for his nerves, which he made into makeshift Magic Circuits due to his wrong method of training. Once his real Circuits are awakened, he goes through extreme pain and suffering as his nervous system gets used to the new intake of energy. His newly opened Magic Circuits can barely handle ten units of prana each and will require intense exercise for several years until they can reach their full capacity of roughly fifty units and function as they were supposed to.Due to having Avalon implanted within his body, which saved his life during the great fire, Shirou has an extremely potent regenerative ability while Saber is summoned due to Excalibur, though it does seem to sustain him even without it as he was able to temporarily survive a fatal blow dealt by Lancer. This allows him to survive numerous fatal wounds and, as revealed in "Last Episode" caused him to become functionally immortal much like Saber. Unlimited Blade Works also seems to protect Shirou by creating blades within his body to reinforce it. He is able to survive a blow to the chest from Rider's dagger, which is repelled as if it is hitting metal, a kick that would have gouged his stomach only knocks him away, and he manages to keep from having his entire body destroyed from an attack by Gilgamesh. The ability seems to go out of control while his body is fully breaking down in the Heaven's Feel scenario, they are constantly being created and protruding from his skin. Having the artifact, implanted in him for many years is also, how, he has an Origin of "Sword" and Elemental Affinity of "Sword". It allows Shirou to manifest his reality marble Unlimited Blade Works and the derivative skills inReinforcement and Gradation Air orProjection Magecraft. However, this leaves him unable to use magic of the traditional five great elements with precision due to lacking any as an alignment, though it is noted that having an Origin and Elemental Affinity that line up perfectly is insanely rare.He practices basic sword fighting with Saber, though it amounts to little in actual offensive capabilities. While she teaches him, he cannot use her fighting style as a model. He cannot see exactly how she is attacking and their different physiques makes her impossible to copy. It is shown that he will eventually develop a style similar to Archer's due to their shared preference to dual wield swords.
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