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dontletmeboo
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30/05/13, ore 10:37
Cap. 1:
Australia - one last wish

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PS: non mi scappa la cacca oggi :') l'ho fatta stamattina c:

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venjce
Recensore Veterano
29/05/13, ore 18:38
Cap. 1:
Australia - one last wish

Posso piangere?
Si, posso piangere.
Anzi, è d'obbligo.
Questa one shot, (è una one shot, vero? lol) è bellissima, e allo stesso semplice e magnifica nella sua semplicità.
Grazie per avermi chiesto di passare, posso dire che questa è una storia abbastanza originale, e scritta anche bene :)
Brava, continua così :)
Un bacio
Clare xx

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