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Marry me?
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Recensore Veterano
07/06/13, ore 15:19
Cap. 1:

Ciao bella:3
Come sempre sono andata a 'caccia di one-shot', ed ho scelto la tua per la trama:)
Premetto che NON sono una Belieber, bensì una Directioner, però... sì ok, non ti importa niente. Comunque, Belieber o no questa os è bellissima. E' strano leggere qualcosa che non riguarda i 1D, però dai è curioso!! Basta, lo so che non ti importa! Ora vado, altrimenti ti rompo le scatole -.^
Shiao bella xx

Recensore Master
04/06/13, ore 16:00
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bellissimaa!  style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: verdana; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; text-align: justify; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px;">
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cercando tra le OS a rating verde
e...baaam! Ecco che la tua style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: verdana; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; text-align: justify; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; background-color: rgb(254, 254, 254); display: inline ! important; float: none;">
spunta dal nulla. LOL. L'ho letta  tutta d'un fiato, e sai che style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: verdana; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; text-align: justify; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; background-color: rgb(254, 254, 254); display: inline ! important; float: none;">
mi piace parecchio? Anche se ci sono molti dialoghi mi piace, davvero. style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: verdana; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; text-align: justify; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; background-color: rgb(254, 254, 254); display: inline ! important; float: none;">
Dovresti semplicemente scrivere meno i dialoghi e ampliare un po' style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: verdana; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; text-align: justify; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; background-color: rgb(254, 254, 254); display: inline ! important; float: none;">
quella parte in cui ci sono le riflessioni e i pensieri della style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: verdana; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; text-align: justify; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; background-color: rgb(254, 254, 254); display: inline ! important; float: none;">
protagonista.. E poi, e la scrivi in prima anziché seconda style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: verdana; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; text-align: justify; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; background-color: rgb(254, 254, 254); display: inline ! important; float: none;">
persona, è ancora meglio! Sai cosa mi sembra? Uno di quegli style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: verdana; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; text-align: justify; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; background-color: rgb(254, 254, 254); display: inline ! important; float: none;">
'immagina' che facevano ogni tanto su Facebook qualche anno fa. Davvero style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: verdana; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; text-align: justify; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; background-color: rgb(254, 254, 254); display: inline ! important; float: none;">
molto bello, dovresti solo, come ti ho già detto, riguardare
alcuni particolari.
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qual'è la parte che mi piace di più? style="text-decoration: underline; color: rgb(249, 32, 58);">Questa
qua. c: style="text-decoration: underline; color: rgb(249, 32, 58);">



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Tra 8 mesi e 2 settimane ci sarà nostro figlio o figlia in
casa


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Amore Mio*Ti abbraccia* il mio sogno si avveerà, tu sarai la
madre dei miei figli..Mi rendi veramente felice..


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Lo sono anche io, credimi <3 *Si scioglie dall'abbraccio e ti
mette
una mano sulla pancia* Dai adesso tocca a te.. Che volevi chiedermi?


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Beh.. *Si inginocchia e ti prende la mano e tira fuori un anello*
*TuoNome&Cognome* vuoi style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0); text-decoration: underline;">sposarmi?


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anche... 


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Prima che tu parli voglio dirti io una cosa..


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No, amore no! Io Ti Amo non puoi lasciarmi così!


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ahahah Justin ma che stai dicendo?


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Non volevi dirmi questo?


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No ahahah


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Mi sento meglio


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