Ok, dude! We've got a problem u.u
You want to make me cry, don't you?
I really love these two characters and you described them perfectly.
I don't know what to say, the story is sooooo good ♥♥♥
Anyway, I'll be waiting for other stories of yours, so to the next time, brother undead.
-Dark Sun

P.s. I'm a girl xP

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Here I am again :)
...and you wanna make me cry, right? Well, I'm going to.
By the way, did you use Quelaan's dialogues? I have the Prepare to Die Edition, that is only in English, so I recognized them :)
I wonder what our characater answers when the Sister of Chaos talks to him... and Quelaag... she attacks us only to take humanity to save her sister, no? :/
That's a sad, sad story... My feelings... TT______TT
You've been wonderful, as always. Continue writing, English is a sort of charm! :P

Ciao, compagno di falò :)

-Crazymoonlight

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Dear undead brother... I'm returned!
This fic is incredibly sad... but also incredibly beautiful!.. I can't read this fic whitout cry!
After all, the story of Queelan is really sad, she cried for Engyi and, full of pity, she ate the pus and she go against her sister's order. She's very frail... however, your fic is incredible, I hope you continue to write this little masterpieces.. Congratulations! ^.^
Vereor Nox, undead brother!
Vanilla

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