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Ciao! |
Ciao SonounaCattivaStella, questo racconto è davvero bello, meglio dire che è una forza, BELLISSIMO :) |
"Arrivati in prossimità del bagnasciuga i ragazzi cominciarono a montare, con non poca fatica..." okay lo ammetto, per un attimo ho temuto il peggio XD Lo so, la devo smettere di leggere Insegreto, ma capiscimi ormai è una droga per me. Comunque, la storia mi è piaciuta molto; il tuo modo di scrivere è scorrevole e non ho trovato errori :3 Molto carina e molto pervertita (ma dai, quello ci sta sempre 😂) la storia, me gusta mucho :3 |
Allora. ~ Buonasera, sono Oath e devo lasciarti una recensione per forza. Devi sapere che ci sono molte tue fanfiction che ho messo in una qualche categoria a caso (?), con la ripromessa che un giorno le avrei recensite come si deve. Solo che non recensisco da, ehm... Mesi. Stasera mi sono imbattuta in questa e mi ha talmente colpita che mi sento troppo in dovere di farmi sentire. (?) Insomma, sono una tua ammiratrice. Ho letto alcune tue fanfiction RanTaku - TakuRan (o quel che sono, non ho molta memoria) che sono meravigliose. ;///; E ora parliamo di questa. Vorrei iniziare dicendo: sposami. È la prima cosa che ho pensato quando ho letto la parola: "mellifluo". Mi hai fatta innamorare con una parola, immaginati quando l'ho letta per ben due volte. La Lingua Italiana ti ringrazia. ♡ La storia è... Originale. Okay, forse sono ritardata, ma personalmente non ci avrei pensato. Hai avuto un'idea geniale e l'hai sviluppata bene. Questa fanfiction mi piace moltissimo. * /// * Ed è da sempre che voglio dirti che apprezzo molto il tuo modo di scrivere. Scrivi proprio bene, in maniera così scorrevole, adoro le tue descrizioni... Davvero, complimenti. Sono sincera, ho letto in fretta perchè ero troppo presa dalla lettura, e quindi non sono in grado di farti notare eventuali errori. >< Sono una lettrice inutile. (?) In generale, adoro le tue rating red. ~ E anche questa non è da meno. Anche se io Kariya lo vedo uke e Shindou seme. >< Questa fanfiction ha ribaltato tutti i miei canoni. >A< Rimango per le mie idee, ma anche così ho apprezzato tutto. * ^ * E quindi, eehm... Cioè. (?) Un sacco di sinceri complimenti! Questa fanfiction è davvero meritevole e tu sei un'autrice che stimo moltissimo. ♡ Ci tenevo molto a dirtelo. Sono a dir poco felice che nel fandom di Inazuma Eleven ci siano ancora autori come te. :') Complimenti ancora e... e magari alla prossima, chissà! ^ w ^ Nel frattempo, ci vediamo sulla Luna! ☆ ;D |
Ciao Fanny! ^^ |
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