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Cuochi, moschettieri e... golosità!
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Capitolo breve ma piacevole. La storia procede bene :) quindi ancora complimenti. |
:) una storia davvero divertente. Ho letto la tua risposta e ho capito perchè usi un carattere piccolo. Quindi prometto che non criticherò più questa tua scelta :) comunque, ho visto che hai messo anche molte one-shot su Dartanian e passerò volentieri a dare un'occhiata anche a loro. |
La storia inizia molto bene. Sembra divertente e attinente al genere e alla trama della storia originale. Niente errori grammaticali o sintattici ma dovresti usare un carattere più grande. La voglio seguire e voglio recensire tutti i capitoli. |
Hi like this? ^ ____ ^, The Musketeers went after the thieves, who to get rid of them, began to throw the entire contents of the cart was stolen, but in their mad race lost control of this and turned both the thieves and the Musketeers, managed stop the thieves unfortunately chef's recipe lying on the ground, mission failure and there was no time to do it again, Aramis wasted no time to scold Porthos, Athos spoke soothing but his friend, they all felt bad about have failed, they returned to the people realized that the royal insignia were put, this meant that the king was present, they were concerned, serious scolding spectacular, given the humiliation of the king, in the way they encountered villagers and peguntaron was going on, these were told that the chef of the king was the winner of the contest, they could not believe, as was possible if the recipe was on the floor, rushed to get there, they were informed that the winning recipe was taken from his shop, but they do not know how, anyway it worked out well the king was proud, the chef had his reputation and no one knew what happened, you thank the chef for his support made the recipe that had been stolen, they were happy, congratulated his friend, this story is very original, especially the way they invented mayonnaise, congratulations, I hope you revisit the other stories, thanks for sharing ^ ____ ^. |
Hello, telesette, |
che bello questo capitolo e quante emozioni. |
Hello! like this? ^ ____ ^ I am pleased to update, the Musketeers have each taken their positions to ensure the protection of the chef, unfortunately Porthos, who is only thinking of his stomach under the guard, this was exploited by two thugs who stole unhesitatingly the recipe, Porthos goes in pursuit, in the way they encounter Dartagnan is joined after Athos and Aramis are requesting an explanation, not wasting time scolds Aramis Porthos, but that better leave it for later, the last two Musketeers go in search of their horses to chase the thieves, I hope that our friends achieve retrieve the recipe, although this does not save a scolded Porthos by Athos and Aramis, I hope the problem is fixed soon and may raise whole chapters, update soon, thanks for sharing ^ _____ ^. |
che carina questa storia |
Hello! I hope this good ^____^, a chapter very funny, especially the funny scenes between Porthos and Aramu are a necessary complement, she rebukes him for not screwing up this, which is more serious, that its espacion to Nese, I think that Porthos is going to be used at the time you put Nese to cook, but I kind of danger is prepared for the four friends, apart from a stomach congestion, I liked your idea of a culinary chapter, just missing a food fight, or a pie fight, if you have bad memory Aramis Devil by the cakes, I'll be waiting for her next chapter, thank you for sharing ^_____^. |
ciao! |
Hello! I hope this good ^____^, is good to know you, but it is wise to this and has three ongoing stories, all with different themes, I hope soon to update the other two, this story is a comedy but is that Porthos becomes part series, plus a plot against the king, that's more serious, the four friends are going as an escort, at this point until they will be able to be poisoned, just to taste the dishes, I wish you happy new year and soon Update your story, thanks for sharing ^____^. |