EFP Fanfiction, recensioni per Summertime di reggina

Recensore Master

25/10/21, ore 19:13

Cap. 25:

Fondo

Eh gi�! 3 fuochi d'artificio pi� la mamma...che spettacolo! Qui scopriamo che a Julian piace il caff� amaro...strano per un dolce ragazzo come lui...

Recensore Master

25/10/21, ore 19:07

Cap. 24:

Proverbio

Semplicemente sei sua figlia, sangue del suo sangue e cos� via, e ti conosce bene! Sa come e cosa dirti perch� ci � passato prima lui! Sei fortunata signorina, hai un padre che vale oro!! Bellissimo capitolo, commovente!

Recensore Junior

24/10/21, ore 23:36

Cap. 22:

Sapone

THIS is another favorite oneshot of mine!!! X’DD

You portrayed everything perfectly! Well done! 😁💖 I remember reading a Halloween scenario written exclusively for Jun x Yayoi in game by Takahashi-sensei in which Yayoi made a sweet trick to lure Jun into a Halloween party set by her and the Musashi guys, and after that he wore a Vampire 🧛‍♂️ costumes also bought by her. Guess what? Instead of saying no, Jun complied to her request and they spent the Tokyo Halloween night togther,🥰 Yayoi as a beautiful witch and Jun her Vampire Knight. 😊

Similarly in this case, I love her mischievous tone. They are no longer teenagers but I love
how they can act like lovers and best friends at the same time. Hmmmm beware of the sweet revenge from her Prince, in bed. 🤭😉

Recensore Master

24/10/21, ore 22:57

Cap. 24:

Proverbio

Chi pu� ben dire una frase come quella non pu� che essere Jun. Dopotutto la sua vita � stata tutta all'insegna di inciampi e problemi, ma non ha mai demorso e ha raggiunto tutti gli obiettivi che si era prefissato, sia sportivi sia professionali.
Summer si � lasciata sopraffare dal momento ma l�appoggio paterno riesce a rincuorarla. Misugi fino all'ultima cellula, non poteva che essere cos�.

Recensore Master

24/10/21, ore 10:22

Cap. 23:

Appuntamento

In effetti quella di Summer, a intenderla come l�ha intesa Jun, era una richiesta alquanto strana.
Di nuovo torna la Sindrome del Padre della Sposa, ma questa volta non � il caso.
Certo che Summer dovrebbe essere meno criptica; dovrebbe pensare alla salute del babbo.

Recensore Master

23/10/21, ore 23:26

Cap. 23:

Appuntamento

Eh lo credo che ha sospirato di sollievo...qualunque padre vorrebbe essere una mosca e tenere d'occhio tutto coi suoi occhi...beh per stavolta la tua bambina ha bisogno di te perch� ha paura forse, e con ragione!! Per ora ti puoi rilassare...ma quel giorno arriver�...

Recensore Master

23/10/21, ore 12:04

Cap. 22:

Sapone

Le tre piccolo sono tenerelle (il lavoro di Summer poib� tutto un programma 😀)
Jun ci ha proprio preso gusto nel suo ruolo di padre (� perfetto, ma lo era fin da giovane, visto il carattere). Chi invece ha tirato fuori un delizioso lato bastardo � Yayoi che incastra il marito, che secondo me in realt� non ha bisogno di essere incastrato perch� non ce lo vedo proprio nel ruolo di uomo distratto e menefreghista (per� una spintarella ogni tanto non guasta, giusto per...)

Recensore Master

23/10/21, ore 01:08

Cap. 22:

Sapone

Ossignur Julian, stavolta come ne uscirai? Ahah, voglio proprio vedere che scusa ti inventi 🤣🤣!! Brava Amy!!!

Recensore Master

21/10/21, ore 23:16

Cap. 21:

Fiammiferi

Vero, � in hobby veramente strano, ma alla fin fine ce ne sono di peggiori, e in casi particolari pu� venire utile.
Jun, all�idea di scoprire che la figlia si sia data al tabagismo, � gi� pronto a partire con un pistolotto (che peraltro mi trova assolutamente concorde).
Yayoi lo salva da una brutta figura e contemporaneamente gli perdona il fatto di aver origliato impunemente. 😀

Recensore Master

21/10/21, ore 23:14

Cap. 21:

Fiammiferi

Mah...difficile dire dove stia la verit�...io spero che se summer � una ragazza intelligente, abbia provato ma mai iniziato veramente...

Recensore Junior

21/10/21, ore 22:57

Cap. 12:

Memoria

Ooohhhhhh..... this oneshot is so beautiful. Definitely one of my favorite in your series!🥰

Well, as you may have already figured out in my fanpage, Jun 👑✨ was a charmer at the age of 11, or even before that! Girls fell at his feet and they were ready to kill just to have his attention. Poor Yayoi became their target of bullying as it turned out Jun fell in love at first sight with her and wanted to challenge Tsubasa also because of her, after Yayoi declared Tsubasa to be her boyfriend in her former school. 😂 What a manly passionate kid Jun was, also at the age of 11. 👀

I know it’s hard to believe, but on the romance scale, HikaruxYoshiko is considered the most traditional and innocent couple (mainly because Yoshiko is modeled after a typical Japanese maiden as pure as snow) whereas JunxYayoi is completely the opposite! So if you believed our JunxYayoi was innocent, I’m sorry... it was a big mistake! 🤣🤣🤣

Luckily, their three daughters wouldn’t learn of the truth unless grandpa and grandma or any of their so-called ‘uncles’ friends of her father/mother spoiled it to them. 😅

Recensore Junior

21/10/21, ore 22:22

Cap. 19:

Gola

What great news that Summer is going abroad to study for her future! But about that “empty nest syndrome” I do think our Prince was a bit overdramatized and melancholic. 😅 He still has the most beautiful woman by his side and their two younger daughters! How can he forget such a fact? Again, typical of a cancerian ♋️ man who is caring and overprotective of his family. 🥰 Aww... guess from whom did Summer inherit her cooking skills from? 😉

Ps: Is Taro still living in France here in your fic? I thought he went back to stay in Japan once his career is over, like Jun did. 😉

Recensore Junior

20/10/21, ore 23:18

Cap. 18:

Lampone

🥺 Past memories bring back pain & sadness but luckily we know it was already in the past and that period of hardship and incredible endurance & willpower have forged a superhero like Jun Misugi. A slight cold won’t beat him, especially in the sweet care of little Summer and grandma Andy. I love it when you include Jun’s mom and give her a more stable air being the mother of the one-n-only Tokyo’s Prince. 😇 We know her overworried n overdramatic feeling root in the reality that she treasured Jun too much and was scared of losing him. She should have believed more in Jun n supported his decision like Yayoi always does. Jun is a wonderful man who has never disappointed the women who believe in him. 💪👑✨

Recensore Junior

20/10/21, ore 22:54

Cap. 17:

Nove

Oohhhh is THIS the secret you spoiled to me (partially) before during our talk? It is... WONDERFUL!! I always feel sth is lacking as Jun is a father of 3 daughters yet no son, but you gave us a wonderful surprise. I really like it, seeing our Prince admiring his younger daughter in such a proud way..., or is he though? 👀😅 My God! He is just the same possessive overprotective prince he always is, even as a dad! In situations like this Yayoi always seems to be more mature and handles things much better. Bless that boy who dares to touch Jun Misugi’s eldest daughter. 😂

Speaking of which, is Summer aware of the fact that her father secretly tried to woo her mother at only the age of 11? 😎 (as revealed in ‘Memories’)

Recensore Master

20/10/21, ore 22:06

Cap. 20:

Cesto

Eh, i ricordi possono essere armi a doppio taglio. Ti riportano indietro nel tempo e ti restituiscono momenti della vita, ma portano con s� anche un velo di malinconia per quello che avevi e che si � perso irrimediabilmente nelle spire del passato.
L�unico modo per gestirli � quello di contemplarli senza immergervisi troppo a fondo e cercare di godere di quanto si � guadagnato ora, nel presente, fosse anche solo il piccolo piacere di condividere la quotidianit� con chi ti � vicino.