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Hello! like this? ^ ____ ^, That good that quick update, Athos indeed lost his head, he is breaking duel with Renee at that moment the man if the consequences, at first it's raining, Renne not used to the skirt, makes his best but not the same, firmness of boots and pants, and are talking about the secret, opposite Francois, Count this entranced with the Amazon, I think Athos will have to fight hard to regain what is lost , not half the satisfaction that beat Renne, now is down Athos challenging to finish the duel, but confession is upset it made him furious, he revealed that the captain and Dartagnan were aware, it will happen I think that only the intervention of Count stop the duel, just want a proper marriage proposal by Francois, give final rapier Athos to react and open the eyes of what is missing, I hope your update, thanks for sharing ^ ____ ^. |
Hello! like this? ^ ______ ^, Well at first I thought that as an excuse to put Aramis officer, but had to be put so violent Atho only make things worse achievement now knows the truth of Renne, worst Francois I challenge you to a duel to see their conduct against the lady, but I react sack Renne character, she does not need anyone to defend it, the young former teammate challenge even duel, frankly I hope she wins, that defeated Athos watch your lady goes with another, only then understood his mistake, I hope the next chapter, thanks for sharing ^ _____ ^. |
Adesso che il mistero è stato svelato Athos tira fuori la sua parte peggiore; l'arrivo del giovane De Reynaud ha complicato le cose; Aramis dovrà dare molte spiegazioni a tutti e due. |
Hello! like this? ^ _____ ^, This chapter left me cold, it is true that the attitude of Aramis is rare for a lady, but also Athos step, I think even intentionally did not think he would do that to another lady, for Aramis I can only say that "the fish dies by the mouth", the explosive character, now and leave this?, one can argue that someone close has told much about it, also this not reveal his source, not wanting to harm his "brother", I hope your update, thanks for sharing ^ _____ ^. |
Oh no, Renée, anzi Aramis si è tradita! Adesso la copertura non avrà più senso.. se lui però ha già intuìto qualcosa prima di venire da lei era inutile lo stesso! Adesso sarà tutta da vedere!! |
Il comporamento di Athos è di grande aspettita. Si è alzato immediatamente quando è entrata Renèe . Sarà andato a casa della damigella per riportarle la scarpetta? |
Hello! like this? ^ ____ ^ A very short chapter, Renee is right maybe who are afraid for their secret is Athos, but in this case both have much to lose and fear, want to meet him in a dark room lest they see their characteristics I just hope Cinderella scene when Athos offered the shoe, but will give it to Renee or Aramis, I hope the next chapter, thanks for sharing ^ _____ ^. |
Perché ci lasci sempre sul più bello?! Renée ha trovato uno stratagemma, ma temo che non sarà sufficiente, Athos ha l'occhio lungo da sempre! Credo però che anche lui sia in imbarazzo se ha scoperto che Renée è Aramis, la quale avrebbe ora così scoperto la sua vera identità: ognuno dei due sa il segreto dell'altro, e questo potrebbe portarli ad una sorta di reciproca complicità. |
Thanks so much for writing this wonderful fiction! it's getting really exciting... I think our count/musketeer thinks he's got the upperhand as he knew who the girl's "brother" was... I just wondered why he turned pale? was it because he identified who the girl looked like ? or was he bothered because he actually thought he's got a crush on Aramis because he found a girl who looked like him attractive? LOL |
Sembra proprio che il mistero di Aramis sia stato svelato ad Athos, Renée farà bene a guardarsi dal suo compagno d'armi. |
A Olivier è preso un colpo! |
Hello! like this? ^ ______ ^ Finally dreaded chapter, Athos turned pale when he heard the mysterious girl, I call your attention, is the sister of his best friend disípalo and Aramis, was first noticed Francois also interested in her, but says nothing Athos it is assumed that he is courting Evangeline, perhaps for this reason she did not comment anything about Aramis, Athos, not good to know your opponent, when the musketeer knew this revelation was as if you callera lightning, but will you notice?, close the resemblance, those eyes, but also must have felt that he knew her, he thought to Athos now, at first no claim does not tell anything about his private life , as he never did with his friends, can not wait to read what happens, not delay in updating, thanks for sharing ^ _____ ^. |
Sembra tanto la scena di Cenerentola che abbandona il ballo e perde la scarpetta di cristallo. |
Hola! como esta? ^_____^, hermoso capitulo, claro que Renne no piensa lo mismo, ella estaba mortificada, Athos la había visto en un vestido, claro el no lo sabía, pero después Aramis no tendría cara para verlo de frente, trato de escapar, pero al parecer desde que la vio, Athos no la perdió de vista, la encontró sola en la salida, trato de hablar con ella, pero Renne estaba a la defensiva, algo no muy correcto en una dama, pero esto solo encantaba mas a Athos, el se acercaba a ella cuando su siervo llego a tiempo, Renne literalmente salió corriendo para escapar, pero en su huida, no solo dejo su zapatilla, también una razón para que Athos la vuelva a ver, hermoso nuevamente Aramis está en el papel de la cenicienta, me pregunto si podría haber una bella durmiente o blanca nieves, Aramis envenenada por Milady, súper, quien quiere un príncipe azul, prefiero un mosquetero rojo, ahora dos caballeros están tras Renne, pero como reaccionara Athos cuando descubra la verdad?, espero el siguiente capítulo, gracias por compartir ^____^. |
Renée ha fatto come Cenerentola, ma al contrario della favola questo non le porterà una risoluzione dei suoi problemi, Athos non sembra mollare la presa! |