IO ASPETTO QUESTO FOTTUTO CAPITOLO DA MESI, TI RENDI CONTO?
Ciao, mi chiamo Giorgia e sono quella balenottera che hai dimenticato mesi fa. (?)
Il capitolo è tanta roba, bao.

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mi mancavate? hai il coraggio di dire: mi mancavate? wow. SE NON FOSSE STATO PER ME TU NON AVRESTI SCRITTO UNA CIPPA!
ora: UN CAPITOLO COSì CORTO E SENZA QUELLO CHE VOLEVO IO?
o se il prossimo non arriva in meno di una settimana e non sarà lungo chilometri le prendi Enrica, ma proprio muori <3
vuid lav.
Manu

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BRUTTA (non è vero) CAPRA DEL MI CORAZON, NON PUOI AGGIORNARNI DOPO MESI CHE NON MI RICORDO NEANCHE SE AVEVO O NO LETTO LA TUA FF.
E PORCA PIGNIAAAA!
FDOPGJOFDIJGDFOJGOFDJGIOFDJGOFJDOGJDF *-----------*
è una cosa fjoidjgofdjg 'sto capitolo ue!
Allison-Malik forevah ue!
continua o ti mangio.

con amore,
Marty xx

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[CIT. GIUSTINO.

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finalmente li ho letti tutti :')
*applauso* *si asciuga la lacrima* *fa inchino*
ok però la parte del sesso con matt era *wwww* voglio fare sesso con matt(?) ahahah lol
voglio l undici, ora. ok? ok

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awww,sono nuova (:
questo è il mio primo capitolo che leggo di quesat storia e devo dire che mi attira molto.

chia,xx

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Mi piace tantissimo questa storia e adoro la tenerezza di Zayn*-* il bacio pdnhxhinejixjmixeij! Scrivi l'altro capitolo perché sono troppo curiosa D:

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INDOVINA CHI SONO ? sono Sara, si :')
allora, non sono brava con le parole quindi, davvero, non so che dire . solo che, dio se sei brava Enrica . amo come scrivi e amo la tua capacità di descrivere ogni singolo momento . amo come esprimi ciò che i personaggi provano e le emozioni che gli esplodono dentro , che poi sono le stesse emozioni che riesci a trasmettere a me quando leggo .
sei, sei bravissima, ragazza, davvero .
taaaaaaaaanti baci,
Sara :)

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i'm heeeeere! sono @ohmyharold_1D, e come promesso sono quì a recensire la tua storia sperando che ricambi:3
comuunque, mi piace molto, davvero. spero continuerai presto!**

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Eccomi qua :3 serata due.
ODDIO *---* IL BACIO. Non perdono tempo cavolo. Zayn è la cosa più dolce di questo mondo e Ally è adorabile per come agisce d'istinto pentendosi poi senza un motivo.
Mi piace sempre di più ùù ora si complicano le cose vero? Lo sento.
Domani vado avanti col terzo :3
Quindi... ciao ùù

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Ok, visto che brava? ùù ora recensisco per bene ogni capitolo.
Allora, Zayn è adorabile qua *---* è troppo carino e dolce. L'ha aspettata mentre si preparava ci rendiamo conto?
Poi va beh lei è fantastica tranquilla in pigiama ùù
Mi piace un sacco poi Londra, come on potrebbe piacere una storia londinese?
Ifine mi piace come scrivi, è scorrevole e piacevole da leggere.
Quindi ora vado avanti recensendo un capitolo a sera :3
Grazie per le tue recensioni, AHAHAHAH sono praticamente tutte risate ma le adoro <3
a presto xxx
Nena

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Migliorata rispetto al primo, decisamente.
Ma c'è da dire che è un mattone, vai a capo, ogni tanto D:
Comunque è carino e scorrevole, mi piace :3

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Metti lo spazio dopo i punti e dopo le virgole.
Mai scrivere 'ahahaha' in un testo.
E' carino e scorrevole, ma puoi dare molto di più.
Falle fare il salto di qualità!
Ce la puoi fare.
Ora leggo gli altri, ci vediamo all'ultimo che hai pubblicato.

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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! FInalmente! Pensavo ti fossi dimenticata di questa storia! Ti perdono perche il capitolo è dhwkjfhwki *-* la parte del bacio poi! Mamma mia! Continua presto, perchè mi emoziono sempre a leggere i tuoi capitoli ahah :')
Non far passare troppo tempo eh, mi raccomando! E se sono anche un po' porno, per me non ci sono problemi! AHAHHA
Un bacio ;)

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presentalo a me sto zio èé
ahahah sto sclerando, si nota??
bello bello bello.
ora mi mancano SOLO sette capitoli, SOLO!
ahah *-*

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*OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO*
c'è no ma che dolce Zayn? *OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO*
mi piace troppo uù
ora continuo a leggere gli altri capitoli che mi sono persa perché sono frocia uù

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