Cazzo. Sono nella merda! E ora cosa fanno?!
No senti. Devi aggiornare, devo sapere come continua, ORA!
Ciao <3 
Liz

awww ti voglio beneeeeeeeeee <3 <3
1)come sai come gioco a ping pong? XD (la fama della mia pessima mira mi precede?)
2)aw sono la pazza che crede agli alieni
3)le ombre woo hoo
4)non sono i Vashta Nerada vero? ç_ç
5)non ho idea del perchè continuo a fare le recensioni per punti :')

e fa la sua apparizione il... cacciavite sonico! ^~^
l'unico vero e inseparabile compagno del Dottore!
e da ultima ma non meno importante l'investitura di Leda come companion <3
p.s. non ho idea del motivo per cui non ho recensito alcuni capitoli gosh
p.p.s. io non penso che i capitoli siano troppo corti
p.p.s. l'ho già detto che mi piace come è strutturata la narrazione?

1) la storia è avvincente e mia piace sempre più :)
2) non so ancora chi siano i Naki :(
3) DALEEEEK 
4) EXTERMINATE
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6) ci ho provato XD

Ehy ciao! 
Anche se, come dici tu, sono una novellina riguardo alla serie, ho deciso di leggere la tua ff 
Non avendo voglia di recensire capitolo per capitolo recensisco tutta la storia nell'ultimo capitolo scritto. Bene.
La storia è molto bella, la lettura veloce e scorrevole ma ci metterei un bel avvertimento OOC...
Scusa, so che sentirti dire una cosa da me sembra una presa per il culo...
Io non so praticamente NIENTE della storia del Dottore, sono solo alla 1x7 (ho appena scoperto cos'è un Dalek *o*) 
ma se non sbaglio il Dottore è piuttosto elusivo quando si parla dell e sue origini.
A parte questo la fan fiction mi è piaciuta molto *-* 
Continua ti prego, sei davvero notevole come scrittore, non vedo l'ora di leggere il resto. 
CIAAAAOOO. CONTINUA. NEDDO IL PROSSIMO CAPITOLO. FAI PRESTO. WAAAA *w* 

 

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*si calma* i naki e i dalek *~* bah sclero Bellissimo capitolo
Ma.
Li.
Voglio.
Più.
lunghi.

Buh. Non indovinerai mai chi sono. E no, non ho i capelli rossi(?) Vabeh, apprezza lo sforzo che ho fatto effettuando l'accesso alle 23:13. Allora, come ti ho detto, dato che è il mio campo, sono critica e la tua storia è carina. Punto primo: CAPITOLI TROPPO CORTI. Te lo hanno detto anche altre persone, spremi di più le meningi. Punto secondo: descrizioni nulle o quasi assenti. Descrivimi cosa cazzarolina fanno i personaggi mentre parlano. Punto terzo: hai scritto "il tizia" lol Bandiera bianca, ma apprezza la recensione. Ciau Hamtaro.~ ♥ - panda.

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Le ombre non sono quello che potrebbero essere, vero? È vero che ti sei inventato un nuovo mostro? Dimmi di si D: Comunque, a pelle, adoro questa Mars v.v Falla riapparire più tardi perchè c'è qualcuno qui che la stima v.v Per mancanza di tempo non sono riuscita a recensire lo scorso capitolo, e a nessuno interessa ma ok v.v Al prossimo capitolo! :D

(E invece l'avevo recensito... Ah il Parkinson a 18 anni)
(Recensione modificata il 30/05/2014 - 04:04 pm)

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Cosa sono quelle ombre nere? Eh?? EH??
Lo voglio sapere. Quindi, aggiorna :3
A parte questo, bello, mi piace. Come al solito ovvio! Scrivi benissimo, e rendi bene a parole quello che hai in quella testolina pazza <3 
Aggiorna presto! 
Ciao <3 
Liz 

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Boh, tu fai i capitoli troppo corti. Sei peggio di Game of thrones.
Boh, lasci i capitoli a mezzo fare e poi te ne vai, come se come se... boh. (troppi boh oggi).
Aspetto gli altri personaggi u.u
ps_ chi sa che fine fa quel Luke Regan :O

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Cirusss :3 Sono Virgi, e sono qui per recensire la tua fantastica storia (ma va?), mi dispiace si non aver recensito gli altri capitoli, ma non ho avuto tempo. Btw, adoro questo capitolo: ci sono Leda, la cit. Luca, Mars e il Dottore, che si può desiderare di più dalla vita? XD No, a parte scherzi, mi piace come scrivi, grammatica corretta, ovviamente aspetto il prossimo *velata minaccia* v.v Ok, mi dileguo
Un bacio <3
Cissy

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wooooooooooooooooooooooo, capitolo bellissimo, ma voglio un capitolo più lungo! TU DEVI FARE UN CAPITOLO PIù LUNGO OPPURE GLI ANGELI PIANGENTI VERRANNO A FARTI VISITA.
dopo questo sfogo, adoro la cit di luca in questo contesto e poi Mars cattiva :o non me lo sarei mai aspettato.
Okay quindi basta scleri e al prossimo capitolo doc

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No okay allora. Cominciamo. 
Primo, sì, sei pazzo, mettitelo in testa uu 
Secondo, se un mago nell'inventarti balle
Terzo, L'HO DETTO IO CHE C'ERA QUALCOSA SOTTO! Muahahahahahhaha! 
Detto questo, mi dileguo. 
Addio ❤️
ti voglio bene ❤️
Liz

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Fantasticoooo!! :D Non vedo l'ora di leggere il prossimo capitolo!! :D :D

Con "fantastico" e i bastoncini alla crema hai vinto tutto, sappilo. Ma perchè fai i capitoli così brevi? c.c non è giusto sappilo c.c
Comunque, la protagonista assoluta del capitolo è la carta psichica (God save it) ed è proprio tipico suo mostrare un documento per presentarsi... I mean, chi caccia la carta d'identità quando conosce qualcuno? xD Va beh, comunque sempre più bella la storia e aggiorna presto! (Giusto un po' di pressione) Al prossimo capitolo ;)

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