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evvai...ora può entrare in scena il nostro buon porthos.....sì dai qui ci sta davvero bene! |
bel capitolo come al solito per quanto riguarda la tua domanda.. io sono di parte anche perchè una situazione del genere l'ho già ricreata anche la mia Milady sbatte in faccia ad Renèe( nel mio caso) la verità su Athos ma poi l'amour trionfa sempre... secondo me la tua Aramis molla tutto per andarsene in fondo ha ancora il casato donatole dalla regina no?? e mi immagino Athos al suo inseguimento che cerca di farla capitolare... |
Hello! like this? ^ ____ ^, A painful chapter, with lots of action, unfortunately tragic, because not only left a broken heart, a heart that was killed to recover, the great fear came true Porthos, will be more difficult to recover the wounded soul Aramis woke with a sore head and shoulders for a moment thought he was back in his cell, but she looked around a room with a table where his arms and Athos, she look at his companion, he was chained to the floor away from her, I could see that if wound was reopened, she called him to wake him, Athos react, the first thing was to ask how she was, both confirmed that they were fine when the room door was opened Milady entered with a look that both feared the worst Musketeers, Aramis looked at her with a hatred that did not understand, but just remember everything he did, made her hate her more, Athos also looked like a demon, Milady turned to the table to select the weapon you would use first, she took the dagger from Aramis, I wonder if it was, the challenge Aramis, Milady slapped result causing the wrath of Athos, she was happy the musketeer, she I ask him if he gave the knife to Aramis, Athos did not answer, Milady Aramis aimed a blow at the bow was asked again to Athos, he replied that if he gave the knife to Aramis, Athos Milady gift confirm that the dagger when Aramis Musketeer received his mantle, as that wise?, both looked Musketeers, Aramis try to fit in the chair where it was tied, she thought a form of release would be very painful but also that his forces would be reduced, but not had no choice but to dislocate the shoulder and wrist, but his action was interrupted when Milady started talking to Athos with a name she did not know, Milady saw the confused look of Aramis, Athos then addressed, saying he did not counted out his true identity, even when he made his mistress, Aramis said he did not believe anything, she lied, she began to tell Milady that Athos was Count Oliver de la Fere, Milady was his wife and they were married, Athos was not free, seeing that he had the attention of the girl, Milady went to Athos and kissed him, the Musketeer began to squirm, she was hurting in the wound, except that bothered him the touch of that woman, Milady turned to say who was the wife of Athos, Aramis felt die, but still did not believe it until Athos cry that was false, I wanted to hear the earth swallows it, but wanted to destroy Aramis Milady she continued pouring alcohol to bleeding wound, Athos face him cry, he wanted to tell the truth, but Aramis turned to him, had more important things to think about, or concentrating on something else, Athos is cursed, never thought it could be ruthless, as well I can not imagine loving again, but Milady started his torture to Aramis said she was exactly like the behavior of Athos, the way was saying that he loved her, Aramis just nodded, the evil woman said steps he continued to court her, never wrong, she told Aramis knew all that, it was his wife, did the same with her, shouted Athos to shut up, Milady turned to the left claiming that hung from the tree Aramis was not listening is concentrated on achieving disengage his wrist, Milady was looking for another weapon, Aramis was ready to disengage his arm and free himself from the ropes, she would not cross looks to Athos, he pretended to go tied, Milady turned Aramis to hurt her, but Athos to stop call her by her name, Aramis was the coup de grace, the musketeer killed told him that she was not guilty, said Milady's lover kill her husband, when the woman is ready to stab Aramis this was released, the two women began fighting, Aramis was blinded by pain, anger, a cry that belonged to no one, the two stared, a move would be fatal, Aramis had to get a weapon in addition to protecting Athos, Aramis took his sword, Milady want to hurt Athos, this achievement roll to dodge the knife, Aramis achievement have an advantage over his rival, fought on finally achieving Aramis master, but not shattered by pain was contained beating mercilessly, until the voice of Athos her out of her grief, telling him to stop, she will assure a hook, seeing that he would do more damage, recovering his composure as a soldier, remembered he had an accomplice who never to found, was the man who also damage the cell, Aramis try to catch his breath, went to Athos I look at it in a way you never thought, I wanted to hit him, but could not think that the love she felt for him was turned to hatred, even loved him but was destroyed at that time I hear horses approaching, Aramis, Athos tried to deliver but it took the keys to the chains, she went in search of a partner, he found in his blood, Aramis began to feel ill, pain fatigue was running with his forces at that time met Dartagnan, Rocheford and Porthos, she pointed out the room with Athos, without saying anything started down the stairs until he fainted, Porthos the caught before he fell. |
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brava bel capitolo! ricco di suspance e di emozione. |
solo una cosa da fare ora.... |
Hello! like this? ^ ____ ^, In his hiding Milady looked at his trophy, medallion Aramis, she saw him with the same hatred of its owner, she is ready to escape from Paris, but thanks to the Musketeers Charmine able to know where her hideout unfortunately this woman had ways to monitor the perimeter, when I look through his telescope the first thing I saw was caramel Athos and Aramis, for his pride was the coup de grace, apart from his hiding place was discovered, her ex-husband had dared to take it out of your mind and heart, with the birth of a new love, she could not allow it, but first had to get away, then the battle began, the four friends fought like old times, when they managed to escape some of the men of Milady, Aramis saw when this was escando, without thinking ran to prevent their escape, but Milady had already boarded the boat, blinded by anger Aramis jump to this, but still I manage to jump into the boat, not could keep his balance, fell so violently that giving unconscious, which was by Athos Aramis, he ran after her, when he saw her go by Milady, with horror saw Aramis did not move on the deck of the boat, when Athos achievement reach the deck of the boat safe, wanted to go see Aramis but the enemy was prevented, resulting in a violent duel, in his distress Athos wanted to end his opponent to see Aramis, Milady behind was ready to shoot but there was no chance, Athos I end up with his opponent, when he wanted to go by Aramis was beaten unconscious by falling back, and Porthos Dartagnan could only view with anguish about what happened because the boat was out of reach, hours later, Milady had everything ready to escape, his accomplice had a wagon loaded with barrels of jewelry was missing only take care of the Musketeers, who were still unconscious, she instructed the man to do with them, one time I finish its task, Milady offered him a bottle of wine in which moments before had poured poison, the man drank the poison did not take long to take effect, Milady got rid of her latest accessory, now only had to fulfill his revenge in his two enemies. |
Hello! like this? ^ ____ ^, A very hot episode, Dartagnan Aramis went to tell the enemy had begun their misdeeds, they burned their shelter, to destroy all the incriminating evidence, Aramis felt useless and humiliated for the first time, all his friends were on a mission without it, to Athos could not be quiet, the Gascon was to calm her down and ask him to stay, they return with news, had started a storm, it would be good to help control the fire, she felt the need for revenge, took the sword but could not, hours later Aramis lighted candles to continue drawing more, she started drawing with a different air, after being in the arms of Athos, she was agitated, restless, could not live without Athos, then knocked on the door, Athos was to tell what happened, he was all wet, but awakens to find he did not think the captain knew that if, Athos realized that she was only a thin nightdress was barefoot, Athos gave his report, managed to burn all the evidence, tried to extinguish the fire but it was useless, the worst was that they escaped, but they have not left Paris, so there is still danger, Aramis asked by his friends, he said who were guarding the place, Aramis began to think and worry, she knew that the end is near, all were in danger, she was afraid of remembering the past, Athos realized his fear, took her hand to kiss, he said good night, Aramis react badly, asked him to stop, Athos agree to leave, but she asked him to stay a little longer, he refused, said he had to think, he retired, when I hear the clothes fall Aramis, the attempt to take it when I hear the petition of Aramis, she asked him to stay with her that night, Athos shuddered at his touch, resisting treatment, but she moved closer to him, Athos could not resist his touch to your body Naked, he began to caress her, they hugged, denuded Athos took her in his arms, completely surrendered their repressed desires, Aramis surrendered completely to the man she loved, Athos even had an internal struggle, he was not very convinced but surrendered to it, the storm outside was, almost dawn when entejaron a second time, Aramis, Athos knew he was a lover insatiable and wanted to try all of it, Aramis told him I loved him, Athos hesitate to say something, but Aramis when he tried it with silent kisses, as not wanting to hear something that would not, when it dawned Athos back to your room without anyone noticing, but before leaving he said that after it was over Aramis could perhaps, Porthos and Dartagnan returned for breakfast, while Aramis was happy in his bed breathing the scent of Athos. |
Wow!!!!!!! Ok, ok, commento per come si deve! Athos finalmente ha aperto il suo cuore, ma ancora non vuole approfittarne, pensando che lei non sia pronta. Lei, a dispetto di ciò che pensa Porthos (che spero non metta in pericolo la coppia), è invece innamorata e sicura di volere il suo amore, ormai non ha nulla da perdere, si concede perchè la vita le ha insegnato che il tempo è prezioso, e bisogna godere di ogni singolo attimo. L'amore tra i due è travolgente, passionale, infuocato ma con tanta dolcezza. Cosa dire? Che mi hai fatto sognare finora, che non mi aspettavo questi sviluppi repentini, (anche se la storia si articola su un tempo lungo mesi) che cmq ogni cosa che succede per adesso mi fa vedere le stelline, perchè gli occhi di Aramis per il momento sono anche i miei. Voglio continuare a vedere la vita con gioia, certe volte c'è bisogno di leggere qualcosa che viene da dentro, ti prende come non mai e ti lascia il sapore dolce negli occhi... grazie per le tue parole, grazie per ciò che hai scritto, sei perfetta, ti ammiro e ti incito a continuare a scrivere. |
ED ECCO QUI, PER LA GIOIA E LA CURIOSITÀ DI BAY (Aproposito....che fine ha fatto??) "IL CAPITOLO", QUELLO CON LA "I" MAIUSCOLA. |
finalmente il primo passo è stato fatto...ma come mai ho la sensazione che nulla sarà così semplice? |
che porcellini!!! |
Eh, no, un momento: hai già postato un golosissimo nuovo capitolo da leggere, ma io devo ancora marcare il territorio anche qui! |
finalmente si sono più o meno compresi..almeno da un punto di vista prettamente carnale... mi piace soprattutto Porthos..lui sì che è un amico vero e sincero e profondamente protettivo verso la sua amica.. Athos..stai attento a quello che fai.. ora hai fatto il passo..spero non più lungo della gamba..non puoi più tornare indietro..altrimenti entro io stessa nella storia e ti faccio vedere i sorci verdi! |
Hello! again! ^ _____ ^ thanks for updating so fast, a beautiful chapter, but it became a two-edged, Porthos and Dartagnan that morning was discussing the plan of attack, Aramis looked at the maps, recognizing the sites where they believed was the enemy was hiding, but did not know who had returned to Paris, the theories were two, one that would make a counter-coup that returned the other for the loot stolen from the iron mask, but Porthos wonder aloud why were in the palace the other day, I reflect Aramis, said it was a way to challenge them, they had entered the palace, but fear overcame her, were so close to her, Porthos realized his discomfort, Porthos wonder which was the order, they enter day attack one of the venues, Aramis became concerned when he saw the site on the map, it was hard to get there with the horses, but Dartagnan said if they were orders, the problem is that command the mission Rocheford his guards, the Musketeers are only help, they were silent, Porthos reminded the captain's orders and was by the swords, they had to train Aramis, Aramis hours after return to room Athos, Aramis felt bad lesson fencing was difficult, Porthos, and Captain Dartagnan forced to fight, the captain was required to be tried, wanted him to do as before, but his hands are still not well, her wrists ached, was not strong as before, would never be the same, also did not want to, that there was Aramis, was not a musketeer, when the battle was over would be alone, I just thought I wanted to be with Athos, but it was impossible and she had rejected, but thought he might enjoy it for a few days, she opened the bedroom door, saw Athos stood before the mirror, wearing only bands in the chest and trousers, had finished shaving, Aramis scolded him, the doctor said he should not up, Athos turned toward her, wondering which was the captain's orders, but Aramis could not answer, was agitated before the body of Athos, finally answered in a few days, Aramis told him he had to rest, the musketeer said could not rest at such a time, Aramis blocked his way, hoping that he used to push with, Athos approached her, took her by the arms and kiss, Aramis felt like lightning in the body, but not rejection, she hit her lips, Atho relax his grip, turned into a hug, which corresponded Aramis, they separated and again looked more passionate kissing, petting Aramis Athos began, little by little the shoulder to reach their buttocks, finally surrendered to her, apologized, said he loved her, hoping that enough, sat Athos and Aramis in bed on her legs, she asked to believe that was in his arms, as often dreamed that no longer felt alone, but felt silly when he realized he was crying like a woman, when Athos saw the kiss drying their tears, asked him to smile, she tried to please him, I look at the gently , I rub his face, said he had no forgiveness, I answer that Aramis had his heart, said he had his feet, hugged her and said Aramis, she shuddered saying that it was Aramis or Renee, he said he loves whoever she was, she kissed him, Athos said the strange and lay in bed, started kissing her body, her chest before losing Aramis against, said he was not worthy of his love, his life His body was damaged, he had lied, it was a renegade, as a woman could love renegade did not want to drag her to a life of shame, I look nothing mattered, the past was the past, now who admitted that he loved her, he never would leave, continuous kissing, but did not realize that the door was unlocked, then Porthos make noise if entered, but had to give see lovers embrace, the cold-blooded his steps back, holding his young friend, he could see the scene, happy to see his two friends reconciled, but saw that Porthos was not happy, they returned a few steps, I walk with firm steps but to hear him, touch at the door, said Athos spend quiet hours after Porthos walked quickly Dartagnan could not keep up, the giant was upset, they had taken things from Aramis to his new apartment, but the water was diverted to make another room when he saw they were just talking and Gascon, said he knew what was between them, but did not think I would forgive him so soon, Dartagnan had a bad feeling after years of being together, of battles, friends be divided by loving the same woman, Porthos said that was not the problem, he was upset that after months, Athos tells arrives a few words of love, gives kisses, hugs and is forgiven as if nothing had happened? , Porthos, Athos was afraid that trying to Aramis and the other, I said nice words, the conquered, was sleeping with her, cheated on, then that was going to dismiss as to the other?, Dartagnan said Athos you do that, Porthos said why not, the problem was that I loved Aramis, Athos, the problem is that her beauty to believe that all is well, which is cured, that's a lie she is sick at home, which is fragile but he does not know the months of pain, all the cities for her, as to encourage tube ride, take the chocolate she wanted to die, took her to dance to give courage to live, Dartagnan would argue in favor of Athos, but Porthos added that he did not see the monsters in the drawings of Aramis, the day he saw when he was facing the window without speaking, the days he was without food, he does not know what she expects of her love, was surprised as Dartagnan expressing the giant, said it was his confidant, Porthos, Athos said not understand the reasons, I just wanted a woman, the Gascon saw that Porthos was not wrong after watching his behavior, but knew that he loved Aramis, Porthos Athos I end up saying that if the hurt, he would see with his own hand with his sword, he had taken an oath. |