Recensioni per
L'orrendo foco
di GaiaTon
Ahhhhhhhhhhh.... |
Hello! like this? ^ ___ ^, A short but very significant chapter, Athos finally work up the courage, under the pretext of integrating the sword, could see and talk to Aramis, he looked the house that was there for months, but three weeks have not seen , time was running out, the trial would end, the thought of the medallion in his pocket, was jealous of the gift that belonged to his former love, he knew he could not compete with that man, had not disappointed, she knew Athos would reject it but still went upstairs, knock on the door, I hear someone coming, he was surprised to see the little Jean, the boy greeted him, the Musketeer is wondering what to see, and if Aramis was home? the child back to the table, was preparing a bread with jam, told him that Aramis was home, but could not get anyone, Athos asked the reason, the child told her she was taking a bath, take a hour, if I wait, Athos looks toward the room, I hear sounds of water, ask the child to exist, other bread Jean as he ate, said Aramis prepare the bath, as usual for three years every Friday, Athos was surprised to learn that the child knew the secret for so long, the child keep the secret, no one realized its discretion, the boy had accepted the truth about Aramis no problem, Jean went on to say that she always had something to eat depending on the season, explained that before he could not be inside the house, had to take care not to enter them, but after that, now that there was no secret, could call in, the child was to kitchen, brought a dish of cherries to Athos, shook his head, said Jean Charmine brought them Porthos and Aramis but the almost finished, Athos could not contain the time of jealousy, to hear that Porthos was with her, she felt a pain in the stomach, he put the sword back on the table, saw the small package, wonder if it was the sword, Athos said if he came to return it, but I do not know what to do or expect to leave, he stuck the hand in his pocket to feel the medallion, he wanted to talk to her, but now felt like a fool, you are usually carrying flowers to a lady not a sword, Jean looked at Athos with malice when he saw the movement of your hand in his pocket, Athos was surprised but smiled at the boy, shaking his head, he was wrong, Athos took his hat, he asked Jean to tell her that after passing, he handed the sword by him, the boy said if the musketeer had left, he felt the locket was not entitled to have it but it was all he had of her. |
giusto giusto per alleggerire....insomma....dove c'è aramis spunta porthos,credo che sta cosa a qualcuno inizi a dare un po' noia....ahahahahahahaha! |
Lo sai che sono molto affezionata a questo breve ma sagace capitoletto, e Jean è impagabile, come al solito. Povero Athos: immaginarsi Aramis nuda nella tinozza e non poter far niente, sapere che si era divertita tutto il pomeriggio con Porthos e non poter far niente, subire i richiami di un ragazzino arguto (si portano rose e non spade alle signore) E NON POTER DIRE NIENTE... |
ciao che capitolo intensissimo! |
Hola! espero este bien? ^_____^, un capitulo melancólico, difícil, molesto, Athos fue a la prisión por ordenes del capitán, por desgracia como esposo de la condenada, tenía el derecho de recoger sus efectos personales, cosa que le desagradaba, la última vez que estuvo en ese lugar, fue para rescatar a Aramis de la hoguera, pero ahora estaría para ver el final de una verdadera bruja, aun con la orden de el capitán , Vesmul se estaba negando a seguir las ordenes, alegando que solo podía entregarlos a la persona señalada, Athos que se estaba molestando, no tenía intención de dar le explicaciones de que él era el esposo, además de ser el conde, la solución más simple que ya sabía, una moneda de oro, cuando estaba en camino a la oficina, Athos se estremeció por los gritos de los condenados, inmediatamente pensó en Aramis que estuvo cautivo en ese lugar como un condenado, sintió un gran dolor, en ese momento se acordó de algo, que habían pasado por alto, las pertenencias de Aramis cuando fue apresado, estas nunca fueron reclamadas, pero como solo había una forma de obtenerlas, vio en su bolsillo, el tenia otra moneda de oro, cuando llegaron a la oficina Vesmul le entrego una bolsa con objetos, Athos la abrió y miro, un anillo de zafiros, una cruz de oro, monedas, cartas, el contenedor con el veneno, otras joyas, peo lo que llamo su atención fue que ella tenía el medallón de Aramis, el lo tomo miro la joya, el retrato de la joven, el no la había visto en días, Aramis no quería verlo, después fue al anillo, si le quedaba, Athos guardo todos los objetos en la bolsa, pero cuando Vesmul creyó que habían terminado, Athos le ordeno que trajera los objetos del mosquetero Aramis, el guardia se iba a negar, pero el mosquetero saco la moneda de oro, además de poner su espada como amenaza, el hombre sin protestar puso un paquete largo en la mesa, Athos lo abrió , vio la espada de Aramis, pero era lo único, Athos recordaba que no, el reclamo una bolsa de dinero, que Aramis gano apostando, el mosquetero dijo que esa noche era un recuerdo muy preciado para ella, pero Vesmul con miedo a su reacción, dijo que eso era todo, aun con Athos amenazándolo con el arma de Aramis, juro que no había más, Athos decidió que después volvería por información, cuando iba a salir un sonido lo detuvo, alguien cantaba, Athos se sintió mal cuando reconoció la voz, el se volvió al guardia, eso no estaba permitido, Athos pidió ver a Milady, pero se le negó, tuvo un mal presentimiento, comenzó a hacer preguntas por los turnos de las rondas, miro las puertas, el tenía miedo de que la mujer escapara, el sabia lo corruptos que eran y que no hacían su trabajo, también sabia que la mujer era capas de cualquier truco, Vesmul molesto por el comportamiento del mosquetero, se puso a discutir con él, pero Athos con voz firme lo amenazo con arrestarlo, si la mujer escapaba, que el mismo lo castigaría, Vesmul no tenía dudas de lo que le pasaría si escapaba, dejo que Athos hablara con la mujer, el la vio con desprecio, como se atrevía a cantar como los ángeles cuando era un demonio, pero se sentía tranquilo de verla en la cárcel, Milady comenzó a burlarse de él, ella aun no moría y el había venido por sus cosas, el dijo que nada era suyo, Athos había comprado todo, pero la mujer insistió, sabía que ahora era un hombre que habia perdido a su a mor, Athos comenzó a insultarla, no dejando duda de que ella no podía hacerle nada para escapar, la mujer se estremeció ante sus palabras, pensó que podría escapar, pero su amenaza no dejo duda que sería imposible, se volvió a burlar de que no era buen católico, no daba el perdón, el dijo que daría su perdón cuando la sentencia se cumpliera, como no vio reacción comenzó a mencionar a Aramis, Athos se molesto no tenía derecho de decir su nombre, el se sentía más fuerte que ella, la mujer se quedo triste e infeliz por no poder causar le mas daño con lo que más amaba, Athos se marcho del lugar. |
È sempre bello rileggere questo capitolo, ne traspira esattamente l'atmosfera giusta: un Athos magistrale ed una milady corrotta che sa esattamente che punti colpire per ferirlo. |
Hello! like this? ^ ___ ^, A decisive chapter, Aramis woke up next to her was Dartagnan taking care of the young man carefully said Milady's judgment was near, she asked where was Porthos, he said he was in the office with the captain and Athos Aramis was surprised and wanted to know why he was in the office, Dartagnan said he was doing his mission report, Aramis said he could not lie, I wanted the truth, the Gascon said of the fight, which prevented him Porthos Athos way to his room, hit him and challenge, which the captain had to intervene, Aramis knew it would happen one day, she immediately stood up from the bed, trying to stop the Gascon, but Aramis told him going to dress, unable to do it alone asked for help, the young man is embarrassed, but helped her, she went to find Porthos, before leaving the room Aramis asked if he knew of Milady and Athos, he said that if, the young man said he was a good friend, she works out in search of his friend, his shoulder hurt with every step, Porthos was in the yard playing with other soldiers, tried to be cheerful, to hide their pain, but was losing bets, the soldiers left the road for Aramis when he approached them, erala first time I saw her as a woman, did not take his eyes of the body, she felt uncomfortable but did not care, wanted to talk to his friend, Aramis saw that Porthos is missing, the others laughed, she neglect them play and win, Aramis realized they were upset, she told the Gascon that he could see the giant fair play, give him what he had earned and went Porthos went after her, he claim that he did, Aramis said they were cleaning, which only wanted to help, the rumors have said that now, but the n could be mad at her, asked her not to do it again Aramis like to say the same thing, was not angry for having beaten Athos, I ask you not to do it again, Porthos was angry, I knew I had told Dartagnan, Aramis thanked him for his friendship, but scolded him, he said did not want to be the cause of their enmity, the giant told him he could not bear to see her suffer because of him, she scolded him, told him he did not understand, Porthos said he knew of his feelings, not a portrait of someone's memory you love, he said he realized everything, but said nothing, trying to deny Aramis, Porthos, but when he said he knew he had slept together, Aramis also try to deny it, but the giant said details, she was ashamed I knew he was telling the truth, she hit him wonder?, the giant told him that when they returned to barracks, he was screaming like crazy to want to see her and asking her forgiveness, because she had to hurt to let go of the strings, guilt nearly killed by Milady, if it had been to another, but was killed Athos, Aramis calm, asked him to stop fighting with Athos, was grateful she did for her, but was more important than kept together three, two of them were friends before she arrived, would not be the cause of their separation, Porthos said he was scared, by the way he was talking about, Aramis told him that when the trial is over she would go, the could not believe it, I wanted to hit the cusa Athos because of his departure, she said he was not the cause, but she made a mistake, the giant asked if she was not deceived, Aramis did not answer, but asked not asked , to leave Athos, Aramis told him, Dartagnan and the Musketeers were important to him that she would leave with their memories, pay dearly for being Aramis, damage to many, just wanted to disappear, Porthos is angry, said if not for his injury beat her, Aramis said ending the conversation, did not want to bother anymore, she asked him to go with the Gascon, Porthos, Athos would wonder if she said she would go home, the giant was scared, Aramis said he would not be upset with him, they departed. |
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Hello! like this? ^ ____ ^, After Charmine report, the four friends did not wait for the master's permission to go and attack the hideout of Milady, to make matters worse two of them fell into the hands of Milady, was seriously wounded, for that reason the captain was furious, but the last straw was when he found Porthos and Athos fighting alongside the room Aramis, Porthos was blocking his way to Athos, the captain ordered them to go to his office, the captain asked for an explanation for their behavior, the giant furious reproach him cheating Athos to Aramis, he was married to Milady did not say anything, Porthos was calm when he realized that the captain knew all about his past, the captain asked Athos had happened, said the musketeer broke his sword that could not fight a friend, the giant was angry at these words, remembering what cry when he was home Aramis Porthos, I cry as I treat the young, wounded by his words Athos told him that if he wanted to hit I did, but that he loved with all his heart Aramis, who only wanted to be with her, yelled Porthos not promise things he could not comply, he continued saying if I wanted to make her lover Aramis, we did not have to cry tell the truth to him but did not tell the truth to her, the captain saw the more the more he recalled a similar event could only smile at the scene, the captain saw the character of Athos had changed, he did not want to hurt is sorry for what happened, he just wanted to be with the woman he loved, but now only Aramis had the decision, the captain also saw what was going on, without thinking to ask if he loved Porthos, Aramis, he just said respected and left the office, on arrival at the barracks Aramis was treated by the doctor, this will accommodate the shoulder and wrist, Aramis is unconscious and sometimes heard loud noises wake after sleep again when he awoke well remembered thanks the pain I felt, what happened to Milady, she was alone in his room, then entered the room Athos, Aramis looked at him and then looked away, Athos sat beside her, she said she had to cured, Athos said he had to be with her, Aramis asked to leave, Athos asked who would listen, she called out, looked at him with anger, begged, but told him to leave, then she looked the room told him what he thought the night they were together, but the pain made her go, she only was her lover, asked to leave, Athos apologized and would always love her, leaving Aramis left with their grief . |
Sono veramente dispiaciuta per Athos. Perchè io capisco le sue motivazioni, e so che avrebbe voluto con tutto il cuore dire ad Aramis del suo sordido passato. Capisco anche Porthos, e capisco anche Aramis, insomma capisco tutti ma faccio tanto il tifo per il povero Athos. Io spero sempre nell'happy ending, soprattutto per chi ha tanto sofferto e per chi ha tanto amato. |
ulllalà!!!!! |
Athos sta tentando di metterci una pezza ma, il danno è abbastanza grave. dico abbastanza perché la moglie non è certo un agnellino indifeso e la loro storia era finita da un pezzo però...NO NO NO! |
Ciao!!! Scusa il ritardo, ma la mia permanenza in un'altra città mi ha impedito di godere appieno di questi ultimi due capitoli! Beh, commenterò questo, in tutto. |
Ciao, ho aspettato con ansia questo capitolo e devo dire Magnifico!!!! |